Wednesday, May 24, 2006

Arcane ~ First Line Poetry Challenge II

As I step out to this new world, where fascination and fear takes ahold, did we really stray from the road? After this tragic fall, our souls are sold, Begun is the lethal movement for drastic change considered so bold, This is our just reward, In the name of revolution and change. As I step out of this new world, thinking if our lives have changed for better or worse, seeing the same depressing scene over and over, finally knowing we csn no longer save ourselves. From our own supposed mistakes and lack of control, to deal with our selves and emotions, our actions with causes and effects, knowing how destructive we will forever be, despite our ways.

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2 Comments:

Blogger Jean-Luc Picard said...

Great poetry, Loki. Glad to have you in 'The Federation'.

5/26/2006 12:27:00 am  
Blogger Lady Yuki Shizuka said...

Thanks for the commentary, Jean-Luc :) I wonder what the infamous Squire of Gothos or our android friend would say if they stumbled upon all this?

5/26/2006 10:04:00 am  

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